how do you imagine paradise to be, where you are living? can you describe one scene where you are in paradise?
this is how i imagine paradise to be where i live, i’ll put it in such a way that you can imagine yourself there:
You are swaying on a hammock between two tall coconut trees, enjoying the cool sea breeze as it passes by. You get up and walk along the seashore close to the water’s edge, and enjoy the waves gently crashing against your feet. you walk a little …

Ode to Lady Hope
O Gentle Lady Hope, thou star of Summer’s night,
Thou, from whose delicate eyes the love born
Is seen, like roses from a dawning light,
Purple, and pink, and bright, and clear blue,
Joyous– enamoured masses: O thou,
Who walkest to their honest fate true
The cosy lovers, where they sit young but wise,
Each as a Dragon within its cave, until
Thine open heart of the Moon shall rise
With her vassal o’er the gleaming sands, and brings
(Singing wild songs like eagles to fly in air)
The black stallions and ravens upon trusted wings:
Gentle Hope, who …

Hello So i write alot, and im not sure whether or not to toss out this story idea. Heres the opening i wrote so far. Im open to all opinions. Thanks :)!
His eyes are breathtaking. I had always been hypnotized by that calm, glistening sea of gray, and the way that sea almost became an emerald green in the warm sunlight and a dark shade of blue under the glow of the stars. I always had to look away from his staring gaze, with fear that I would …

Slugs have four noses.
All polar bears are left handed.
In a life time, the average person eats eight spiders.
The longest recorded flight of a chicken is 13 seconds.
Giant squid have the largest eyes in the world.
All porcupines float.
The world record for sitting in a cage filled with scorpions is 21 days.
Elephants are the only mammals that can’t jump.
Humans and dolphins are the only mammals that have sex for pleasure.
Termites eat through wood 2 times faster when listening to rock music.
It only takes monkeys 10 seconds to mate!
An octopus’s testicles are located …

List of decorated eggs and description:
1) Black with purple zig-zag pattern. Near a shadowy and dark place
2) Sky Blue with red dots. Hanging in the air
3) Rainbow. Hanging in the air too
4) Red with 5 colours line. Near a fireplace
5) Plain orange. Under a tree
6) Plain yellow. On the sand
7) Plain green. Camoflaging in a patch of soft grass Plain blue with yellow stars. On a shallow water
9) Pink dots and plain white. Just all alone in the cave
10) Shadow black and purple. Sitting in a dark and shadowy …

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Thanks, i liked your answer!
Roddy S:
Did you even read it?
Signed JONAS BROTHER FAN
musiclover:
I am only 10 years old, I don’t plan on getting this published. Thank you for the criticism, I’ll use that to make it better. I’ll ask my teacher how I can change the "flowery adjectives" thanks again!
When I say no mean comments, I don’t mean that you can’t criticize my writing, and that you can’t help me improve, I mean don’t say stuff like "shut up, no one can be bothered to read something that long"

MY IMAGINARY PLACE
By: Courtney Ngoc-Anh Nguyen
What’s so great about "imaginary places?" They help us relax. How to do it? Just sit or lay down in a quiet room by yourself or with some friends. Close your eyes then before you know it, you’re relaxing! You first have to know what it looks like. Make your own view up! If you have friends over, first you have to use descriptive words for them to picture the imaginary place. When you are done, join the fun!
 Here’s what my imaginary place …

I’m looking for really obscure good music. I like the following:
Adele, AFI, Air Traffic, Andrew Bird, Aqualung, Arcade Fire, Armor for Sleep, As Tall As Lions, Band Of Horses, Bat For Lashes, Beck, The Bird and the Bee, Blind Pilot, Bloc Party, Blue October, The Boxer Rebellion, Boys Like Girls, Brand New, The Bravery, Breaking Benjamin, Coldplay, Company of Thieves, Cursive, Regina Spektor, Death Cab For Cutie, Diplo, Editors, Emerald City, Elbow, Evanescence, Fall Out Boy, A Fine Frenzy, Finger Eleven, The Flaming Lips, Forgive Durden, The Fray, Future of …