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Thanks, i liked your answer!
Roddy S:
Did you even read it?
Signed JONAS BROTHER FAN
musiclover:
I am only 10 years old, I don’t plan on getting this published. Thank you for the criticism, I’ll use that to make it better. I’ll ask my teacher how I can change the "flowery adjectives" thanks again!
When I say no mean comments, I don’t mean that you can’t criticize my writing, and that you can’t help me improve, I mean don’t say stuff like "shut up, no one can be bothered to read something that long"